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Chapter: Chapter 10: Fates Colliding
Fawna has a well-deserved meltdown.
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Fawna has a well-deserved meltdown.
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Poor Fawna… well, at least she’s safe now. Good luck on your writing and on your surgery! I’ll be hoping it helps you do much better <3 .
Thank you!! I hope so too. 🙂
Good luck with your surgery! Also with your Nanowrimo endeavor. I am skipping Nanowrimo this time to finish editing my novel and getting it ready to send off. HOPE to be done by the end of November. And then I will start on something new, maybe do Nanowrimo in December!
Thanks! Nano is a lot of fun so far. Good luck with your novel. 🙂
I like Fawna’s expression in the second panel. It really shows her panic without her face looking too human.
Fawna: “Daemons? Like in Linux? Can I command you by saying ‘sudo’ before the instruction?”
Anor: “We’re not that kind of Daemon.”
Fawna: “Oh, I get it, you’re like from that Pullman novel, but you’re witch daemons so you can be as far away as you want to be from your witches.”
Rava: “I don’t know how she’s getting this information, but this could take a while.”
His Dark Materials was actually a source of inspiration when I was first conceptualising the daemons!
The last panel makes my soul happy. xD I don’t know why. I think it’s Rava’s expression haha
Haha. XD Rava is just like ‘What is even happening right now.’
Soooo many speech bubbles but you integrated it so effectively! And I’m so happy they finally met…!!
It was definitely a challenge squeezing all that dialogue in without it getting overwhelming (though it helps that the first two panels are supposed to feel overwhelming)!